hyperbole

Hello everyone.

I will be shearing with my hyperbole poem.

We had to make 5 over dramatic sen tins that what a hyperbole is.

Here is mean

Lunch box
My lunch box has the sweeties cake in the world.
My apple slices are grosser than a trash bin.
My samwith is yummier than a meal from a 5 start  Restaurant.
I have more food than a buffet.
My chaps are saltier the ocean.
My cookies are better than a gourmet chefs food.

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About Me

Hi my is name Samuel. I am in Hornby Primary School. I am now in Room 6. In my spare time I play on my pc. My teacher is Miss D. Pineapple is my favourite food. 'School Bus' yellow is my favourite colour. I Have one cat and this year she had 7 Kittens but one died. My favourite movie is 'The Mask'.

3D paint

Hi guys. I have made a broken city on paint 3D and you can only get it on windows 10. First make a sea then make a island then the city. Its broken by a meteor that hit the city. Then monsters comes out from meteor. Can i have feedback on what I could add.

Weekly Word's

Hi.
When I was making my slide I was oblivious to the weekly word.
We had to find out the meaning, then we had to copy a meaning and make our own sentence.
We  did it to get better at reading
Can I have some feedback please?
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Hi,

I am shearing wife you my earth science.

My sedimentary rock was made out of  sand and water plaster of pairs wife a little bit of  of color but when we got it out of its box that we put it in it was not. After a week later we Smart it on the concrete to see all the layers. It broke in its layers. I made my one with Sam.

Can i have feedback Thank you for reading.

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hi gays. I am shearing wife you my weekly words. we had to write a definition example my sentence.

give me some feedback on what you would do for it.

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