I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, April 11, 2019
cross country
hi gays. I am shearing wife you my cross country. we had to go around the soccer field two times and do 1 lap around Kyle Park. I was sweating at the end of the race it was prate hared to do. can you give me some feedback.goodbye.
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ReplyDeleteHi Samuel although I like that you are blog posting but you need to try to make it longer and work on you spelling other then that I think you did pretty good and what place did you get I would love to know ?