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Friday, September 20, 2019

hotspot

Hello everyone.

I will be shearing with you my hotspot.

We had to write a story on the picture we were give in.


here is mine.
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I was running from the cops in the year 3030. “Get back hear” “never I am keeping this bomb”. “That going the rocket so give it back” “nope” “errrr” “chef” there is a police station down there” . “Oh there is thanks for telling me” “I’ll be the sky in seconds” bang. “What will he do now” “what if he plants an apple tree”. Beep beep“captain what is it” “where going to blow up the area” “but he has are bomb” “ha its not the real one”  to be continued
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Monday, September 16, 2019

weekly words

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I will be shearing with you my weekly word.

We had to writ down what we new about the word then go get find the meaning from a dictionary and writ a sen tens on what we now about the word.

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Friday, September 13, 2019

hyperbole

Hello everyone.

I will be shearing with my hyperbole poem.

We had to make 5 over dramatic sen tins that what a hyperbole is.

Here is mean

Lunch box 
My lunch box has the sweeties cake in the world.

My apple slices are grosser than a trash bin.

My samwith is yummier than a meal from a 5 start 
Restaurant.

I have more food than a buffet.

My chaps are saltier the ocean.

My cookies are better than a gourmet chefs food.





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