I will be shearing with you my hotspot.
We had to write a story on the picture we were give in.
here is mine.
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I was running from the cops in the year 3030. “Get back hear” “never I am keeping this bomb”. “That going the rocket so give it back” “nope” “errrr” “chef” there is a police station down there” . “Oh there is thanks for telling me” “I’ll be the sky in seconds” bang. “What will he do now” “what if he plants an apple tree”. Beep beep“captain what is it” “where going to blow up the area” “but he has are bomb” “ha its not the real one” to be continued
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