I also went to Kaipoi River and had a swim there. It was really hot I had a Long Nice swim in the cold water it was super cold. I really Enjoyed my Holidays and it was really fun because I went beach and I got a haircut. My Dad cut my hair and I Really like it. I got my Haircut on the first week of the holidays because my dad said my hair was to long.
I enjoyed the holidays because most days it was Nice and sunny and I got to be outside playing. instead of staying outside
Hello Sam. Taylor here
ReplyDeleteNice job on the description, You have told your holidays very well. I had a haircut to but the day before school.
But I saw some Typos like "I went beach" "I got to be outside insted of staying outside"
Anyways, Keep up the work - Taylor
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ReplyDeletei wish i had a dad to give me a hair cut
ReplyDeleteatleast you have hair
DeleteHello sam. Quaiden here
ReplyDeleteNice job on the description, You have told your holidays very well. I got my dad to give me a haircut week before the holidays, Maybe next time tell us what you did at Kaipoi River
Keep your work up
Hello sam
ReplyDeletei really liked your post next time say what you did at the river